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Bonus Chapter!

In which Vaan, Penelo, Ashe and Basch witness a bit of the Viera Mating Ritual for themselves. X3

Timeline: Game, any time about 4 weeks before the Pharos Light House you wanna fit it into. With having to walk to most of the places I doubt the whole quest took less than a month…


“No way!” Argued Vaan “That’s totally bogus.”

“Is not!” Penelo argued back. “I’m telling you Vaan, that’s just how it is.”

“I seriously doubt it.” Vaan said skeptically

Suddenly the argument of two young Rabanastans were interrupted by a sky pirate running by.

“Ah. He can settle this… Balthier!” Called Vaan

Balthier stopped and wheeled around to see who called him. “Ah! Vaan! Perfect.” He quickly backtracked to where Vaan and Penelo were. “Be a good lad and hang on to this for me.” Balthier thrusting his intricately embroidered leather vest into Vaan’s hands. “Ah! And while I’m thinking about it…” The pirate quickly pulled off his shirt and added to the vest in the confused young thief’s hands.

Penelo pleasantly took notice of the dashing young man’s nicely toned and defined torso. “Mmm.”

“Hu? But what for?” protested Vaan

“Because I rather like them and don’t want them to get ruined.” Balthier said as if the fact was as clear as day.

Balthier noticed Penelo noticing him and flashed her one of his charming boyish grins before dashing off again. “Thanks Vaan!” he called as he turned the corner

“But…ah…what was that all about?” questioned Vaan. He turned to his childhood friend, noticing her pleasantly lust tinted smile as her eyes watched the rouge pirate’s backside disappear around the corner.

“Uh! Penelo!” said a flustered and slightly annoyed Vaan giving her a look.

“What?” questioned Penelo “A girl can look can’t she?”

Vaan opened his mouth to say something when suddenly, he found himself flat on his back with the wind knocked out of him.

Vaan was shocked to find a Viera on top of him franticly sniffing at the clothing he was holding. “Fran?! What the…?”

Fran’s head shot up and she glared at Vaan with crazed wild eyes. “Where is he?!” She demanded in a growling echoing voice. “Which way did he go?”

“Hu?” A very startled and confused Vaan asked

“You mean Balthier?” Asked a calm yet amused Penelo “He ran that way.”

Fran’s head shot up and followed the direction Penelo was pointing before rushing off on the route directed.

After the frenzied Viera cleared the corner, Penelo’s curiosity got the best of her and she started to follow.

“Penelo! Where do you think you’re going?” Question Vaan

“Oh come on, Vaan. Don’t act like you’re not interested in seeing this too.”

The young thief took a moment to contemplate and then got up to follow his friend.

Balthier was sprinting upstairs to where the rooms the group had reserved for that night were.

“Hahaha.” The pirate laughed to himself over the fiendish trick he had just played on the poor young desert rouge. “I would have loved to see the look Vaan’s face. So sorry Vaan, all’s fair in love and war you know, and my joke at your expense bought me some time.”

Balthier cleared the stairs and was almost to his room when suddenly Ashe came out of hers, the two nearly colliding

“Ah! So sorry…” Apologies the princess, as she looks up at who she had almost run into. “Balthier! W-what in the world?” She exclaimed getting an eye full of Balthier’s half nakedness.

“Princess.” Balthier flashed Ashe a wide beaming grin “So sorry, my fault, I’m afraid I haven’t the time to chat right at this moment so if you will please excuse me…”

Ashe suddenly gave a surprised shriek as Fran suddenly came flying towards them.

The Viera pounced on Balthier, arms and legs wrapped tightly around him. “Got you!”

It took all of Balthier’s strength to hold his ground and stay standing against Fran’s flying embrace, but managed it. “Yes, so you have.”

“That was a vicious trick you played on our little thief indeed, a cunning ploy to buy you time…devious, yet clever… so very you.” Fran’s voice playfully mischievous

“Yes I thought so as well.” Smiled Balthier, “I figured you of all people would appreciate the fine ingenuity of it... Now then, Fran, darling, if you don’t mind, the clinging grip you have on me is causing your long rather sharp nails to dig into my arm…”

Fran released Balthier and unwrapped her long limbs from around his body. Balthier’s reprieve didn’t last long for Fran then shoved him against the wall and proceeded to ravenously feed on Balthier’s mouth in the form of a deep eagerly zealous kiss.

While Fran attempted to eat Balthier mouth first, her hands frantically found their way to his belt.

Balthier’s hands quickly and firmly grasped the Viera’s wrists causing her to pull back and shoot the man a very unfriendly look.

“Now Fran.” Balthier said in a calm yet firm tone, not flinching at Fran’s evil eye look. “What did we discus about privacy?”

At that moment the door next to Fran and Balthier opened and Basch stuck his head out. “Is everything all right out here?” inquired the ex-captain “What’s all the commotion about?”

Fran took the opportunity to grab a fistful of the unsuspecting man’s vest, wrench him the rest of the way out of his room and dragged her pirate comrade into it, closing the door with a fiercely loud slam.

Ashe rapidly blinked a few times. “Oh…my...”

“Whoa.” Said Vaan peeking up from the stairs with Penelo peeking over him

“What, just…happened?” Questioned a very confused and perplexed Basch

“Well…Balthier had just dashed up the stairs as I came out of my room and we almost ran into each other….then we we’re standing here, when out of no where Fran…” Ashe tilted her head trying to think of the right word. “…Just, jumps Balthier…”

“Flying leap! And then Bam!” said Vaan. “It was so cool.”

Penelo laughed “Ya, it was funnier when she did it to you though. Man the look on your face.”

“Quite you.”

“…And then,” Ashe went on “Fran shoved Balthier against wall and well…”

“Tonsil hockey!” Laughed Vaan “I swear! She had her tongue halfway down Bal’s throat. Oh man it was so awesome.”

“Ew!” said Penelo “No one wants to hear what a flaming perv you are.”

“Ya, and who was the one that wanted to follow them in the first place?” asked Vaan

Ashe continued ignoring the orphans banter. “And now…it appears…”

Heads turned as moans start coming from the room Balthier and Fran now occupied.

“Bal and Fran are totally getting it on!” smiled Vaan “Go Bal!”

“Go Fran.” Penelo giggled

Ashe only covered her mouth and proceeded to turn a bright shade of red.

“I’m putting in for a room change.” The ex-captain sighed and started walking off down the hall.

The blushing princess and giggling orphans followed him down the stairs, leaving the pirates to their affaires.
Viera Flying Glomp of DOOOOM! XD

So, I have one more chapter to this which is going to be the prelude to the next story...It should be up soon followed by the first and second chapters on the new story...

Tho I still haven't decided on a title for the next story... Right now I'm calling it "The fall of the house Bunansa" tho I'm not compleatly satisfidied with that...

Any one have any suggestions... The story has to do with how Bal and Fran's relationship started and also about Bal's family before and after Cid went off to Gilruvegan...
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Haya-Ji-Amatsu Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Okay, Megami I officially love you. I DIED laughing when I read this. Wow. It's kinda weird to think of Fran so uncontrolled.
I couldn't even read the damn story I was laughing so hard. =]
AldusMischaS Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Oh god, it was just great, really great :D

you can post the graphic part on
Pytera Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
Yes someone other than me wrote a lemon(sex scene)!!! I wonder could you actually write the graphic details. I'm not sure if this is popular or not but that's what i plan on doing with mine. Oh and for the mental note he dosn't do it with Fran.
megami195 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I could, but I couldn't post it on Devart. I had one chapter of another fic with the graphic details and the admins deleted it XP
Pytera Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
Could you email me a copy of it me? My email address is
megami195 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
a copy of what?
Pytera Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009
Your fan fiction.
megami195 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've always just copied and pasted fics to word when I wanted a hard copy for my self...
It's faster than waiting for an attachment to finish downloading
Shay123 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2008
XD Oh my gawd!
"Go Bal!"
"Go fran!"
XD If you ask me they're both flaming pervs!!
oh and Basch should probably get his sheets changed after that!! XD
megami195 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
actualy he put in for a room change XD
RemUchiha Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
Wow, I could totally see that happening. I love how well written these stories are. They actually seem realistic and true to the characters. Great job!
megami195 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks ^^
leopardgecko96 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
ha!!!! Funny
AdorableNinja Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2007  Student General Artist
tomotomonster Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2007
Wow this is <3
BansheePsyche Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2007
WAHAHAHAHA!!! *dies* *miraculously revived* Brilliant, simply brilliant...
tommiV13 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007
*gasps for breath*

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH oh my god that was hilarious. Oh man that's good ^___________^

Thank you so much, you cleared up the bad mood my writer's block has put me in.
crystal-rex Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
aggggh! DA deleted my nice long comment! I should have copyed it T^T

Anyhow... Flying Viera Glomp of DOOOOOM!!!! (loves that entire idea XD) I will always laugh when I see that; you can be assured of that. And Bal getting Vaan like that; pure comedy. Not to mention just the mental image of Baltier shirtless..... mmmmm, nice image. Nice image indeed.

Also, sorry about not commenting on the other two previous deviations! Things have been so hectic lately I totally forgot, but I did read them! AND I enjoyed them and what was in them very, very much ^__^

More characters in this rocks XD I was like "'eeeeee!" at seeing them all :P
megami195 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aw, I hate it when deviantart does that too XP

Heh, Bal's prank on Vaan is something I could totaly see him doing. I think he'd enjoy picking of the would be sky pirate. Vaan is such an easy target too:rofl:

ne, do you know :iconrazimo: she has some very nice pics of sexy shritless Bal X3
crystal-rex Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so muhc for that link. *biiiiig grin* I had not known of that artist, and now I am very happy. Very happy indeed XD

I just read over the story again XD Man, it gets me every time. I have tears in my eyes XD
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